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What Shall I Speak of Her? by ~sarafandee:iconsarafandee:



What shall I speak of Her?

Shall I speak of the everlasting knowledge, that I am fated by a force of affection greater than I?
Or shall I speak of the endearing ecstasy that dances in my dreams, and nourishes my emotions?

Shall I speak of the overwhelming Aroma, that fashionably inhabits her curls, and revives my spirit?
Or shall I speak of the dazzling eyes, that shine like two brilliant stars, and have the color of a blue summer sky?

Shall I speak of the luscious lips, that silently stroke the corners of an artistic mouth, and mesmerize my soul when they meet mine?
Or shall I only speak of the love she holds over my heart?
©2006-2010 ~sarafandee
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Author's Comments

It's been a long time since I last submitted any of my work of poetry. I have been really engaged with my company's work, in addition to starting my online masters in information systems, you can't imagine the load of work I have on my shoulders right now.

This poem is not necessarly targeted for anyone in my life, but yet, you never know...

I am waiting for your comments on this one...

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:iconcurlyisafreak:
This reminds me of "Shall I compare thee to a Summer's Day..." by Shakespeare. It's 'nice'.
Well done

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I'll make it to the moon if I have to crawl
:iconsarafandee:
Thank you dear

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"Give me the Nay and sing,
The secret song of eternity.
The laments of the Nay will linger
Beyond the decline of existence." ~ Gibran Khalil Gibran

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:iconsaikoor:
You adore her dont you..? -smiles softly and tips hat- Its..beautiful...

:peace:

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"Written and pacing,
words on a line;
scratching quills
surrending to time..."
:iconsaikoor:
Well that is the feeling that comes across.. -sighs- .. one day..
Gah.. im a hopeless romantic!

:peace:

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"Written and pacing,
words on a line;
scratching quills
surrending to time..."
:iconsarafandee:
You cannot be romantic and hopeless at the same time... Don't you agree? It depends on what kind of hope are you talking about...

--
"Give me the Nay and sing,
The secret song of eternity.
The laments of the Nay will linger
Beyond the decline of existence." ~ Gibran Khalil Gibran

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:iconsarafandee:
Adore is only one of the flowers in the garden of words that describe her...

--
"Give me the Nay and sing,
The secret song of eternity.
The laments of the Nay will linger
Beyond the decline of existence." ~ Gibran Khalil Gibran

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:iconryye:
very nice, :) interesting.. keep rocking
:iconmetsunami:
She infests your BRAIN!

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All I need to see what you're thinking is a scalpel.
:iconsarafandee:
Thank you

--
"Give me the Nay and sing,
The secret song of eternity.
The laments of the Nay will linger
Beyond the decline of existence." ~ Gibran Khalil Gibran

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